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求教:翻译

            It was a dark moment, my boy. Perhaps darker than any I had faced before. The ancient serpents paralyzed me mentally and physically with powers not seen on the face of Norrath in five thousand years. They studied me as they would have studied a strange rock. While the minutes crept by like hours they continued hissing to each other, their burning yellow eyes never leaving mine. Only one fate seemed possible. I was surely dead."
Loral paused and scratched his newly grown beard, a habit he knew drove his avid listener crazy. Though the warm breeze and soft rustle of the trees created one of the most serene moments Loral had ever witnessed, his companion, a small Elven boy, seemed ready to break under the tension of Loral's tale. Just as the boy was about to protest, shouting his rage of impatience, Loral continued.

"Their decision had apparently been made. The largest of their number, a great ancient serpent covered with deeply etched glyphes in its rotting scales, moved forward extending a jagged claw towards my face. Red bolts of energy shot from nail to nail as it got closer. But before that horrible claw tore my face and mind from my body and spirit, the creature's head exploded into white light and dark green gore."

The boy literally bounced with excitement.

"Zolina knocked another arrow and let it fly into the chest of the glyphed serpent. Juror's powerful spirit-tipped spear skewered one of the guardians while the rescue party stepped through Tarzel's planar gateway. The shining runed blade of Lavun tore open a rift in the fabric of nature releasing a great green hand of roots, moss and vines that crushed another attacking Shissar between its giant fingers. A huge golem, as large as the fire giants of Nagafen's Lair roared towards the party but a bolt of pure energy burned a hole straight through the beast. I saw the smoking hands and grey eyes of Azile through the hole in the chest of the golem just before it crashed to the ground. Knowing I was safe, my mind turned off and I fell unconscious into the arms of my friends."

Relief flowed into the boy and he fell back against the large oak behind him. Loral smiled and tugged at the fishing line cutting into the mirror surface of the small lake they sat by. Though the boy had heard the story before, he never seemed any less nervous at the outcome than he had here today. Remembering his own actions at hearing such tales of adventure, Loral looked to the boy and smiled. Darlan was a wonderful son, indeed.

Loral's mind trailed back those seventy five years as he thought about the tale of the Shissar. How much his life had changed. How much Norrath had changed. While that day had been dark indeed, many dark days had followed. The Shissar had been a great menace but even they stayed buried in their tomb when the rifts opened. Magic had grown from a thing of mystery and wonder into the norm of everyday life. Merchants and tradesmen no longer traveled in caravans or on ships preferring the speed and safety of teleportation. The Antonican bards had disbanded under the competition of the psychic abilities of wizard guilds. It was a different age.

Then chaos began. It started with reports of travelers becoming lost during teleportation. Stories of parties appearing buried in rock or returning transformed into horrible manifestations circulated. Then the rifts opened. Planiar beasts of fire, stone, flesh and crustation poured into the lands. Armies of city militia were slaughtered by creatures never dreamed of in the worst nightmares of children. Powerful adventurers far and wide returned to their homelands and thus began the Plane Wars.

For ten years the wars raged, destroying cities and gods. Loral's powers of healing fed armies of Elven knights, rangers and warriors. Deep in the wizard guilds of Odus, Felwithe, Neriak and Freeport the great spellcasters looked for an end to the menace and just when all seemed lost, they found it.

Life began again for the people of Norrath. After 120 years of service to the Mother, Loral retired to the life of a jeweler and though his mate, the only mortal woman Loral had ever loved, had been slain in the last days of the Plane Wars, Loral's life was lived again through the eyes of his son.

With the turn of the seasons, Loral and Darlan traveled across Norrath. Over the months they traded the intricate mechanics of Ak'Anon with the velium of the hearty Coldain and the finely crafted gems of Odus for the black acrylia of Luclin. They found great profit in their lives but living his adventures through Darlan was the greatest treasure of all.

Now spring brought them back to Felwithe where they fished during the day and met with old friends in the nearby cities at night. Though his trials had been great over the past two centuries, Loral had finally found the happiness he always sought.

Dark telepathic visions passed from the Shissar interrogator to the ancient glyphed serpent. The beast studied the pale elf, pinned ten feet off the ground by the titanic arms of two enormous golems. Bolts of dark energy sliced through the figure, sending him into spasms. The interrogator had performed such operations before and few had ever survived. Though this broken priest still had some sort of mental activity, the Shissar wasn't convinced that the tiny mortal hadn't already gone insane. A few more hours would tell, but it was doubtful that this one would live through the night.

朋友给的文偶试着翻了一遍,可转过来看看实在拙劣不堪,望各位能抽出时间把这文翻一下,偶也可以学习一下。
偶是初学者,请大家多多帮助~~
            我试了一试,有很多谬误,请赐教
这故事很可怕啊“这是个黑暗的时刻,我的孩子。可能比我过去面对过的更黑暗。
那些古老的大蛇用五千年来在Norrath上没人看见过的法术麻痹了
我的身体和思想。他们研究我就好像在研究一块奇特的岩石。随
着时间的缓慢流逝,它们互相嘶嘶的交谈,同时它们燃烧的黄色
眼睛不停地盯着我的。看来只有一种可能了。我必死无疑。”
Loral停下来,抚摸着新长出来的胡子,他知道这种习惯会让热切
等待的听众发狂。尽管现在是Loral 所经历过的最宁静的时光--
暖人的清风吹过,树叶发出柔和的沙沙声--他的伙伴,一个小个
子的精灵男孩,看上去随时都会因为Loral的故事营造出的紧张
气氛而崩溃。正当男孩要提出抗议,把不耐的愤怒叫嚷出来时,
Loral又继续下去了。
“很明显它们做出了决定。这群蛇中最大的一个走上前来,它腐
朽的鳞片上布满了深深的雕刻的痕迹,将一只锯齿状的爪子伸到
我的面前。当它靠近些时,指甲间发射出红色的能量闪电。但是
在它来得及用那么可怕的爪子撕碎我的脸和思想前,它的头被炸
成了白光和暗绿的血块。”
男孩兴奋的跳起来。
“Zolina又射了一箭,直入那条蛇的胸部。营救小队从Tarzel位面的门口进来时,Juror有力而锋利的矛刺穿了一个卫兵。Lavun的闪亮的魔法的刀刃在自然的织物上撕开了一条裂缝,释放出一只由根系,苔藓和藤蔓组成的绿色大手,把一个正在进攻的Shissar在它巨大的手指间挤碎了。一只和Nagafen's Lair 的火巨人一样巨大的golem冲着队伍吼叫,但是一束纯能量的闪电在它身上烧出了个洞。在它掉到地上之前,我透过它胸前的窟窿看到了Azile冒着烟的双手和灰色的眼睛。明白我已经安全了,我的精神放松下来,在朋友们的怀抱中失去了知觉。”
男孩松弛下来,靠到背后的大橡树上。Loral微笑地拖着投入如镜般的湖面的鱼线,他们就坐在小湖边。虽然男孩早已听过这个故事,他每次对结尾还是和今天一样的紧张。Loral含笑看着男孩,想起了自己听到类似的冒险故事时的反应。Darlan是个出色的儿子,确实是。
当他想起Shissar的故事时,Loral的思想回溯到那75年的时光。他的生活发生了多少改变啊!Norrath大陆也发生了多少变化啊!当真正黑暗的那天到来之后,又接着许多的黑暗日子。Shissar是一个巨大的威胁,然而即使是它们,在裂缝打开的那一刻,也埋藏到它们的坟墓中去。魔法从神秘和奇迹变成日常生活必需品了。商人和贸易着们也不再借助篷车和轮船来旅行了,他们现在更喜欢传输法的安全和快捷。迫于巫师协会的心灵能力的竞争,Antonican游吟诗人们也解散了。时代不同了。
然后混乱开始了。起先是使用传输法的旅行者的失踪开始被报告。人被埋在石头下或者回来时变成了令人恐怖的样子的故事开始流传。接着,裂缝打开了。火焰的,石头的,肉体的还有壳的位面动物蜂拥到大陆上。城市义勇军被这些在孩子们最可怕的噩梦里也没出现过的生物杀害。强大的冒险者们从四面八方回到故土,位面战争开始了。
战争持续了十年。城市和神们一起被摧毁。Loral用治疗能力为精灵族骑士,游侠和战士的军队服务。在Odus, Felwithe, Neriak 和Freeport的巫师协会里,最伟大的巫师们寻找着结束这种威胁的方法,仅仅在输掉一切之前,他们才找到了办法。
Norrath的人们重新开始生活。在为Mother(什么神?)服务了120年后,Loral退休当了一名珠宝商,而他的妻子,他唯一钟爱的凡人女子在位面战争最后的日子里被杀害,Loral与儿子相依为命生活。
随着季节转换, Loral 和Darlan走遍了Norrath大陆。这些年来,他们用诚恳的Coldian的velium(什么东东?)来交换Ak'Anon的复杂精巧的机械,用Odus的精工细作的宝石来换取Luclin的黑acrylia(琥珀吗?)。他们收入丰厚,然而在他的冒险生涯中Darlan是他最宝贵的财富。
现在春天把他们带回Felwithe,在那里他们白天钓鱼,晚上则和附近城市里的老朋友们相聚。虽然在过去的两个世纪中,Loral的尝试是伟大的,他最后还是找到了一直所追寻的幸福。

Shissar讯问着和那条鳞片上有雕刻的大蛇交换了一个黑暗的心灵感应视线。这只畜生研究者苍白的精灵,他被两只巨型golem的力大无比的手臂钉在离地十英尺的地方。黑能量的闪电划开他的身体,他开始抽搐。讯问着以前也做过同样的事,不过很少有人能够幸存下来。尽管这个身体七零八碎的牧师还有一些心理活动,这只Shissar认为这弱小的凡人早已经精神错乱。他应该还能活几个小时,但能不能撑过今夜很成问题。
            感激不尽~~比我的要好太多
呃~~这个故事好象是 无尽的任务 里面的剧情,ancient serpents这个没有专有翻译么?
恩,再次感谢,偶从你的翻译中有学到了东西~~
                   这是我除了做作业写论文外第一次翻译,而且我不大打游戏,玩的也是些大富翁,幻世录什么的,所以也不清楚那个ancient serpents到底是蛇还是别的什么意思,不过看来那东西是有爪子的,是不是羽毛蛇神一类东西呢?
           
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最初由 魂之利刃 发布
这是我除了做作业写论文外第一次翻译,而且我不大打游戏,玩的也是些大富翁,幻世录什么的,所以也不清楚那个ancient serpents到底是蛇还是别的什么意思,不过看来那东西是有爪子的,是不是羽毛蛇神一类东西呢?

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ancient serpents
这个...汗...
呃...可能是吧,就是上面这个图的样子,而且这个游戏偶至今还没玩过...等待国内代理中~
Er...BTW...您是花多长时间全部翻出来的啊
            图看不到
花了三个多小时,谁叫我无聊呢,在家赋闲一个月了
            哦,很快啊~
偶花了一下午...
看来还是要多多学习~~
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