谢谢,可惜发贴太久无法改正错误了

,等过段时间再贴个修改版上来吧
今天的文,顺便在文后附了《冰风谷三部曲》中的相关城市介绍:
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宝剑海岸
在深水城与世界之脊之间夹着的剑海沿岸地区
南北长约七百英里,宽约两百英里。在世界之
脊西边的尖端是冰风谷,费伦大陆(Faerun)
这一带最靠北的定居点。长路(the Long
Road)从深水城一直延伸到米拉巴(Mirabar),
划出了宝剑海岸北部区域的东部边界。
宝剑海岸是北地第一块有文明人居住的地区。
它的大多数地区覆盖着平缓起伏的草原,牧
人和农夫发现这里是生活的理想地方。剑海
沿岸有些海滩上满是卵石,但更常见的是数
不清的海湾和岬角、露出海面的礁石,标示
出沿岸低矮峭壁的石柱被不知疲倦的海浪剧
烈冲刷。这种地形便于走私,但也使靠近海
岸航行的船只很容易被卡住搁浅,而且很容
易受到这一地区沿岸频繁的风暴袭击。
东方是树木茂密的山林和连绵起伏的高大山
脉,越过山脉就是宽广的 Dessarin 河流域。
沿着宝剑海岸,最大的几个贸易城市是 Leilon ,
路斯坎(Luskan),绝冬城(Neverwinter),
Llast 港,深水城则致力于维持这一地区的
秩序。北部宝剑海岸的中心地带地下有许多
的巨大洞窟:高原森林的无尽洞窟、高原沼
泽的地下河流域(从龙矛堡 * Dragonspear
Castle * 通向南方),以及矮人从深水城下
一直扩展到山脉之下的洞窟。
The Sword Coast
Between Waterdeep and the Spine of the
World lies a wedge-shaped piece of land
along the coast of the Sea of Swords,
roughly seven hundred miles north to south
and almost two hundred miles across at its
widest. At the western tip of the Spine
of the World is Icewind Dale, the
northernmost settled land in this part of
Faerun. The Long Road stretching from
Waterdeep to Mirabar defines the eastern
extent of the Sword Coast North.
The Sword Coast was the first part of
the North to be inhabited by civilized
people. Most of its area is covered in
gently rolling grasslands, and herders and
farmers found an easy living here. Sometimes
the land tounches the Sea of Swords in a
pebble beach, but it more often meets
the water in a series of sea caves, broken
rock spits,and low cliffs marked by pillars
of rock severed by the tireless waves. This
terrain lends itself to smuggling, but it
also forces ships that navigate close to the
shore to be small and of shallow draft, and
therefore they are vulnerable to the
driving onshore storms that often pound
the area.
Wooded hills and forbidding mountains
bound the region to the east, and beyond
this barrier is the expanse of the Dessarin
river system.
Along the Sword Coast, the great trade
towns of Leilon, Luskan, Neverwinter, Port
Llast, and Waterdeep keep the area from
descending into chaos. The central portion
of the northern Sword Coast is underlain
by several cavern systems; the Endless
Caverns of the High Forest, the
Underground River system of the High Moor
(accessed from Dragonspear Castle far to
the south), and the caverns under Mount
Waterdeep that dwarves expanded into
Undermountain.
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世界之脊(the spine of the World):被遗忘
的国度中北方最古高大的山脉。——“被许多
人认为是人类文明的北方边境的广阔山脉”
米拉巴(Mirabar):宝剑海岸的矿业中心。米
拉巴因着出产各式珍贵的宝石与金属而成为
一个相当大的矿业城市。与路斯坎跟深水城
的贸易是米拉巴的命脉。
深水城(Waterdeep)与南方的卡林港并列为宝
剑海岸旁的南北两大城市。是被遗忘国度里最
重要的城市,被称做光辉之城。
路斯坎(Luskan):被称为千帆之城,一个位于
冰风谷以南的大城。
附:北地地图
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