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呼!短篇“The Dagger”翻译完成。

呼!短篇“The Dagger”翻译完成。

            好容易翻译完了,一天翻译,一天校对,一天敲上来,(第三天最累!!),译的不好,大伙凑合着看吧。
The Dagger
By Tony Montgomery
译者:Sauron
对于卡丽港来说今天是比较热的,在白天的炎热中,街上是相当安静的,查兰正在神庙的天井中耍着戏法,逗乐围在身边的一群孩子,那是女神的领地,也是任何事情都可能发生的地方。因为这神庙是供奉女神Lillend的,一个在国度中新兴起的半神力神,并以她心中不断围绕的混乱本质而出名。
孩子们屏住呼吸高兴地看着几把匕首迅速地转动着,在空中开成一个圈。查兰露齿而笑:五把匕首没什么难的。另一方面,因为他从小就受过这样的训练。他第一次看到这种戏法就被强烈的吸引住了,一个马戏团到了村庄附近,他也去看热闹。其他的孩子们大喊着让小丑和吞剑者表演时,查兰却被一个另一个杂耍小丑吸引了。
然后马戏团散场时,他没有从马戏团的出口中走出去。他从没有见过哪一个小丑可以连续向上投掷10把匕首而毫不费力。他叹着气,直到他撞上了一个高大的男人。查兰的眼睛看到了那匕首正别在他的腰带上,他屏住呼吸,就是这个杂耍艺人。
这个男人微笑了一下,把查兰从道上推开了,当他继续向前走时,他没有注意到一只小手在眨眼之间抓住了那匕首……一个梦想开始了。
看到那柄匕首正插在他自己的靴筒里,查兰咧开嘴笑了。从前试图掷起这些匕首已使得他的手臂上布满伤痕,直到他懂得首先要试着舞动它们,但这的确值透了。
他在戏法中又加了两把匕首,当然精力要更加集中。他从来没有掷过超过8柄匕首,现在他已经在掷7柄了。他笑了,“我还能再加一把么?”
一个看上去不太聪明的孩子愚蠢地笑着,“扔20把!”周围的孩子们随声附和着。查兰只是到这儿来练习,因为Lillend的神庙通常是很清静的。这些孩子们因此得到了一次观看免费表演的机会。
查兰耸耸肩,算计着十柄匕首,他的戏法会失败的,他向下看到自己腰带上的十七柄匕首。在花样的间隙中,一只手向下飞快的一闪,第八柄匕首也飞了上去。孩子们高兴的大叫,这也吸引了一些辅祭停下来观看。
他耍着匕首,咧嘴笑着,一小滴发亮的汗出现在他胳膊上……冥冥之中到了一个他认为“好”的时候,又一次,他的手向下一闪,另外两把匕首加了上去。无意识地,他将一个圆圈变成了两个圆圈来容纳这些在空中飞舞的匕首,他所做的花样令他也十分惊讶,然后他意识到两个圆圈,可以使他加上更多的匕首。
“好,现在是10把了!!让我超过10把!!”
孩子们咯咯笑着,两外一些辅祭围拢过来,一名高级祭司对于年轻人懒惰的行为,以及去围观一个吟游诗人十分气愤,立刻去禀告牧师。
当牧师来到的时候,离开神庙的朝拜者也都停下来看着表演.孩子们一边笑着一边欢呼,即使大人们都说他这样不能坚持很久。当查兰怂恿他们是否要赌20比散塔时,几个人立刻开始讨论赌注的事情。
查兰舞动着他的花式,并且注意到在左边和右边的圆圈里有一个空隙。他加快舞动他的左臂让这两个“空位置”随着他扔出的匕首而聚到一起。就在这一刻,他加上了一、二、三把匕首!这甚至震惊了他自己,他张着大嘴……但又猛地把嘴闭上了,因为他意识到还有观众。人群嘲笑着他惊奇的样子,认为这也是表演的一部分。
当牧师们下来调查是哪个辅祭正在偷懒时,13柄匕首正在空中上下翻飞。他们正要开始惩戒这些祭司时,却被欢呼的人群淹没了——另外一把匕首也加入了那一团迅速乱飞的混乱中去。
男人和女人们咯咯笑着,打赌开始了,甚至一些零钱落到魔术时脚下,他咧开大嘴对自己笑着,继续把14把匕首向上一圈一圈地扔着。他开始对自己说话,当他失掉了第15柄匕时他的眉头皱了起来……他轻轻咒骂着,镶嵌移动到笔受落下的地方,利索地用脚……几乎又一次失去了希望,他咧着的嘴变成了鬼脸。
“小心,小心!”他将匕首用脚踢起飞入他的花样,但却是一个错误的角度。这导致了他得加快舞动他的右臂。他继续保持那两个圆圈的形状,汗开始落进他的眼中。一边飞快地眨着眼,他盘算着,在接下来的五分钟内,他得将他的花样调整到平衡有序,他想知道他到底还能耍多久??!!
茂斯,Lillend的高阶牧师,皱着眉:辅祭们都哪去了?他已经让一个辅祭去拿纸和鹅毛笔,但是现在还没有回来——他不知道,那个九岁的女孩正在目不转睛地看着吟游诗人。茂斯听见了一声欢呼,他向窗外看去,那是什么??!
他的胳膊剧烈地舞动着,没有停止,一个男人对他大叫,说他的戏法不及黑罗丝……一个挑战?现在查兰知道挑战罗丝已经不在话下,当那个“正确”的时侯又来了时,他的手向下一抖,一把、两把,16柄匕首飞在手中,第十七把……却掉了下来,这时他已经不可能用他的脚了,然后匕首掉落在一个愚蠢的,张着大嘴的男孩旁边。
“扔过来!扔到这儿来,孩子!”
路纳斯望着地上的匕首,又看着吟游诗人,诗人对他报以微笑,路纳斯也向他傻笑,然后他捡起匕首,与其说是扔不如说猛掷了出去。
当看到男孩拾起匕首以最大的力道猛掷出去时,查兰猛咽一口唾沫,他的手向下一闪,就在那匕首将刺进他的肚子时,他抓住了飞行中的小刀向上扔去。他用杀人的眼光瞪着那男孩。那戏法的两个圆圈晃动着,他低声祈祷Tymora,十七柄匕首飞舞在午后的阳光下。
茂斯笑着,与佛艾拉,他的未婚妻,一起在上边看着吟游诗人的戏法。那个人真的是有天赋,他自己只是想同时扔起7把匕首而已。
消息像野火一般传便了神庙地区。从其他神庙听完神谕的人们,都来到Lillend的神庙去看吟游诗人的表演。庭院里越来越拥挤,只能容纳500人的地方现在挤进了800。
一个老人自从吟游诗人掷起15把匕首时就在旁观看,他刚才出去了十来分钟,现在却试着挽救这戏法。越来越多的人进入了神庙。
Shadragux,现在这个戏法的维护者,像Lillend一样,这个国度中的一位半神力神俯瞰着他的城市,注意到了这骚乱……现实画布上的一片涟漪。Shadragux是平衡的力量,是暴风雨前的宁静。他通常出现在极高级的法术被施展、或重大事件的发生时。现在他的思绪飘去调查神庙前喧闹的人群到底是怎么回事。
Lillend自己也对着查兰微笑,尽管她知道那个诗人在向Tymora祈祷。一丝微风开始刮起,吟游诗人感到一丝凉意。
越来越多的人们从各个神庙走出来一起聚到Lillend的神庙附近,神庙里稠密的人群不禁让他们开始打听发生了什么,这促进了更多人的围观。超过1000个有不同信仰的人聚集在神庙里。赌金飞涨,所有的事都是关于那个吟游诗人是否可以再加上另外一柄匕首,或他可以支持多长时间,或是更简单的,黑罗丝是否已经被比下去了。
那个老人看到赌金飞涨时不禁咧嘴而笑,现在有近400块比散塔放在吟游诗人面前,但是没有人能触到它,就好像一种不寻常的,不言的法则,不许染指吟游诗人的酬金一样。
查兰什么也不顾了,他的手臂已经疲倦,他也不认为自己能够坚持多久。突然清风开始耳语,让他从卡丽衫的闷热中凉爽下来。他强迫自己的手臂更加快速地运动。在疼痛中运动。那花样的形状已经稳定下来了。查兰突然咧开嘴笑了,怂恿他们再加一把匕首。那个老人帮了他的忙,一把匕首飞向空中……十八!人群开始尖叫,小孩开始欢呼。
查兰,查兰自己也开始胜利地尖叫!十八!!
十八柄匕首。
Shadragux咯咯地笑起来,开始同Mask下注。Lillend默默许下了一件礼物,如果他能掷到20。吟游诗人们开始喝彩,查兰的戏法值得他所应得到的一切。Beshaba,厄运女神,也向下看着。
查兰觉得他的手很虚弱。他听见那个傻男孩大喊着“20”,另外一些人则说那是不可能的,甚至那些富于幻想的孩子们也十分怀疑。但是那傻孩子笑了……现在路纳斯认为查兰可以掷一百个,二十个当然很容易。
“还跟我赌??我能扔起十九个,谁说我不行??!!”又开始下注了,那个老人又扔出一把匕首。这匕首来得时候不对,查兰几乎惊慌失措。风,死一般静下来,这使他大量地流汗。他的手臂像在着火。他的左脚伸出,接住了匕首,将它踢上了空中,匕首钻进了圈子中,但那里根本没有空隙。查兰奋力迫使它进去,尽管忍受着巨痛,他还是将他的手臂挥舞成一片令人眼花缭乱的动影。他勉强地支持住。他觉得手臂正濒于死亡,而咽喉已经死了。他的心在猛跳,不是因为激动,而是因为过分地疲倦。
人们尖叫着,下了更多的注。众神在向下看着。这时,那个老头皮笑肉不笑的神态闪进查兰的眼睛。他那笑容贴在脸上,甚至是希望查兰能一下子崩溃下去。他开始想一个得体的办法鞠躬下台。
“我出1500比散塔赌他能扔到20柄”那个老头大声说。人们蜂拥而至下他的注。那个傻孩子两眼紧紧盯着查兰,查兰咽了一下。众神嘲笑着这致命的愚蠢。但也在琢磨着这是否能够办得到。
那老头笑了一下“这表演属于你,吟游诗人,”同时扔出了另一柄匕首。
查兰没有准备好,他的戏法没有准备好,他的手没有准备好,当匕首下落时,查兰知道他不能把这把刀加入到戏法中去。他的手正在圆圈的底部而不是在上面,这是多么小的一个空隙啊。他需要他的手在上面来接住匕首。他的左手也不可能再去接其他的了。那柄匕首飞过圆圈到了他的右边。人群中不知是谁的声音说,“你不知什么是牺牲品”……查兰想“我当然知道什么是牺牲!看看我的手臂!”
他的左脚踢出,那柄匕首猛刺进他的脚,带出了血,他扭曲着面孔坚持着。
吟游诗人们欢呼着!这表演必须继续下去!!众神睁大了眼睛。那个男人疯了!人群尖叫着。
所有的事情为这吟游诗人而停下。匕首刺在他脚上,戏法中的间隙还在圆圈里,他听了半秒,然后将腿踢起,让脚急速上踢。匕首离开了脚,但带来了更大的痛苦,他惊奇地看着,好象他可以精确地知道这匕首在飞入他的戏法前能转多少圈。他的手将一把匕首扔上去,轻轻地移出来,抓住了即将掉下来的匕首的尖端,又将它甩了上去。那圆圈轻微地晃动着。他的手有回到了下面,接住了另一柄将掉下来的匕首,整个世界都注视着他,他扔在舞动着那戏法,二十柄匕首构成一个模糊的圈。他的耳中充满了观众们的歌唱,像雷鸣般的吼声,“匕首!!匕首!匕首!!”
查兰微笑着,将它的匕首如泉水迸发一般掷出。他向后走去,匕首刺进堆满硬币的沙土,他拔出他的匕首,拣起他的钱,人群的吼声一直回响在天空,他的头感到非常沉重,他向那个男孩报以微笑,走过现在这些崇拜者中间。
所以查兰变成了“多手查兰”,或有些地方直接叫他匕首,现在的南方国度中最有名的魔术师。二十柄匕首,或者只有一瞬间,在空中飞舞。众神那一天同时对他微笑与蹙额,因为他甚至在某种程度上也挑战了他们。

神名字都没译过来,译过来不好。大家拍板砖吧!!!(别打头,傻了)
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                   没看到原文。就译文来说,太棒了。很好的故事。

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            辛苦了,速度满快的,我以为至少也得一个星期才能看到呢
另外,你即然那么能敲字,把原文也敲上来吧;)

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                   半神力神……好难听的名字,还不如不译,直接叫demipower算了

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            好你 Thalantyr ,不许提意见!!! biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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                   嗯,我见过原文,忘记在哪里了

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                   Cool...

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            帖子是去年放上的,限一个月,但我当时没看见(没上网)前几天查资料时偶然看见,就翻译了,(太晚了!!)
现在贴出原文来:
The Dagger

By Tony Montgomery

It was a relatively hot day in Calimport, the streets still fairly quiet in the daytime heat, Chullan was having some fun, entertaining a small gathering of children inside a temple courtyard. It was a place of goodness, yet a place where anything could happen. For the temple was that of Lillend, a relatively new demi-power in the Realms, and Lillend was known for her chaotic nature that surrounded her heart of goodness.

The children gasped with delight as the daggers twirled into the air in a circle. Chullan himself grinned. Five daggers wasn't too hard, but then, he had been training since he was little. It had fascinated him when he had first seen juggling. The circus had been near his village, and he had snuck in. Other children had exclaimed about the clowns and sword swallowers, but the juggler had held Chullan's attention.

Later, when the circus was over, he had not moved from the entrance to the circus. He never did see the clown who had tossed 10 daggers so effortlessly. He sighed, as he turned around and bumped into a tall man. His eyes caught the dagger in his belt, and he gasped... THIS was the clown!!

The man smiled a bit and pushed Chullan out of the way. As he walked onward he didn't notice a small hand, snatching out as quick as a wink... and a dream was born.

Chullan grinned as he looked at that same dagger in his boot top. His arms were covered with scars from his early attempts to toss those weapons, until he learned that he should try with rocks first. But it was well worth it.

He added another two daggers to the pattern, having to concentrate a bit more. He himself had never gotten past 8, and right now he was doing 7. He grinned, "Shall I add another?"

The big not-so-bright boy grinned stupidly, "DO TWENTY!" The children around him cried out in agreement. Chullan had come here to practice, as Lillend's temple was a quiet place normally. The children consequently received a free story.

Chullan shrugged. He figured at about ten knives, he would lose the pattern. He looked down at his belt and saw that he held 17 total daggers. A hand flashed down during a lull in the pattern and an eighth was added. The children cried with delight, loudly attracting the attention of a few acolytes who stopped to watch.

As he worked the daggers, he grinned, a slight sheen of sweat building on his arms... something just felt.... right. Again the hand flashed down once and then twice to add two more daggers, automatically he turned the one circle into a double circle to accommodate the amount of daggers flying. It sort of surprised him as he did this, as he noted that with two circles he could add more daggers.

"Well now, that's 10!! Ten more to go!!"

The children giggled as a few more acolytes gathered. One of the senior acolytes got angry with the younger ones being lazy and watching a stupid bard, and promptly went to tell a priest.

By the time the priests had arrived, worshipers who were leaving the temple stopped and watched the show. Children grinned and cheered, even as the adults said that he wouldn't be able to maintain the flight of knives for very long, and were astonished when Chullan challenged them to a bet of 20 bicenta. Immediately several takers took the bet.

Chullan looked at the pattern and noted that there was a lull within the right and left circle. He sped up his left hand so that the two "empty" spots came together as he tossed, and at that moment added another one, two, THREE daggers! It had even surprised him, as his jaw dropped... but he snapped it shut realizing he had an audience. The crowd laughed at his surprise, thinking that it was a part of the show.

Thirteen daggers twirled through the air as the priests came down to investigate the acolytes who were being lazy. They started to chastise the would-be priests, but were drowned by the cheering crowd as another dagger was added to the mass of twirling confusion.

Men and women giggled, and bets were placed even as a few coins began to fall at the juggler's feet. He grinned more to himself and continued to toss the fourteen daggers around and around. His confidence began to build and he frowned again as he lost the fifteenth dagger... cursing softly he moved towards where the dagger fell, and caught it neatly with his foot... again almost losing the entire load. His grin turned to a grimace.

"Careful, careful" he kicked his foot up and the dagger entered into the pattern but at the wrong angle, causing him to have to speed his right hand up. He was able to maintain both circles, as sweat began to drip into his eyes. Blinking rapidly he managed, after nearly five minutes, to get the pattern back in order. He wondered how far he dared to go??!!

The Mouse, the High Priest of Lillend, frowned. Where were the acolytes at? He had asked that one go get him paper and quill, but hadn't received it yet. Unknown to him, a young girl of about 9 was staring at a bard. The Mouse heard a cheer and looked out the window. What was this??!

His arms were burning, but he didn't stop. A man yelled at him, saying that he was not as good as the Black Rose... a challenge? Now Chullan knew better than challenging the Rose, but at the same time it felt "RIGHT!" His hands snapped down and up, once and then twice, the sixteenth dagger was in his hand and the seventeenth... was falling!! This time he wasn't able to use his foot, and the dagger landed by the dense boy whose mouth was wide open.

"Toss it!! Throw it here boy!"

Lunas looked down at the knife and then back at the bard. The bard smiled at him, and Lunas smiled back. He picked the dagger up and hurled it rather than tossed it.

Chullan gulped as he saw the boy wind up and throw as hard as he could. His hand flashed downward, and just before the dagger punctured his stomach, he snatched it from mid flight and tossed it up. He glared murder at the boy. The patterns of both circles were wavering. He muttered a short prayer to Tymora, as seventeen daggers flashed in the afternoon sun.

The Mouse grinned as Fiora, his fiance, joined him atop the hill, watching the bard juggle. That one had talent! He himself had only managed to juggle 7 daggers at one time.

Word spread like wildfire to everywhere in the temple district. People getting out from the sermons of other Churches, entered Lillend's temple to watch the bard, and the courtyard became more and more crowded. Nearly 800 people crowded into a place meant for only 500.

The old man had been watching the bard since he was on 15. He had been going now for some 10 minutes, and even now was trying to hold the wavering pattern. More and more people were entering the temple.

Shadragux, the current Vizier and, like Lillend, a new demi-power in the Realms, looked out over his city, and noted the confusion... a ripple in the fabric of reality. Shadragux was a power of balance, the calm before the storm. This normally happened when a great spell was cast, or a great event happened. As his mind reached out to investigate he saw the crowds gathering at the temple.

Lillend herself smiled down upon Chullan, even though she knew the bard was praying to Tymora. A slight breeze began to blow, cooling the bard.

More and more people were leaving the various churches within the temple district, and the crowds entering Lillend's temple made them curious, thus causing more people to crowd in. Over a thousand were inside the temple now, all from various faiths, and the bets were flying. Everything from whether the bard would be able to add another dagger, to how much longer he could hold on to the daggers he currently was juggling, or if it were simply the Black Rose in disguise.

The old man grinned suddenly as he listened to the bets fly. There was nearly 400 bicenta in front of the bard now, but none would touch it, as it was sort of an unspoken code to not touch the bard's earnings.

Chullan was desperate. His arms were weary, and he didn't think he could hold on much longer. Suddenly the breeze began to whisper, cooling him off from the Calimsham heat. He forced his arms to move faster, and worked through the pain. The pattern began to stabilize. Chullan grinned suddenly and challenged them to toss another dagger into the fray. The old man obliged him and a dagger went flying into the air... EIGHTEEN!! People began to scream the children cheered Chullan, Chullan himself begin to scream in triumph!! EIGHTEEN!!
EIGHTEEN DAGGERS!!

Shadragux grinned, and began to place bets with Mask. Lillend smiled and silently promised a gift if he made twenty. Bards applauded, and Chullan tossed for all he was worth. Beshaba, the Lady of Ill luck looked down.

Chullan felt his arms weakening... he listened to the dense boy cry out for twenty. Others said it was impossible. Even his fanatic children fans were skeptical. But the boy grinned... Right now Lunas thought that Chullan could toss a hundred. But twenty would be fine.

"Bet against me?? I will give you nineteen!! Who says I cannot??!!" Bets were placed, and the old man tossed. The dagger was mistimed, and Chullan almost stumbled. The wind died down, causing him to sweat profusely. His arms were on fire. His left foot shot out, and caught the dagger, kicking it up into the sky, and the dagger was thrown into the pattern where there wasn't a lull. Chullan struggled to force it in, his arms a blur of motion despite the muscle pain. He held on barely, and though his arms were dying and his throat dry, his heart pounded more from excitement than weariness.

People screamed, and more bets were placed. Gods looked down. The old man's half-smile caught Chullan's eyes. He kept the grin plastered on his face even though he wished he could collapse. He began to seek a way to gracefully bow out.

"Fifteen hundred bicenta says he can toss twenty daggers" the old man stated loudly. Men rushed to take his bet. The dense boy only had eyes for Chullan. Chullan gulped. Gods laughed at the foolishness of mortals, but wondered if it could be done?

The old man smiled, "Its your show bard," as he tossed up another dagger.

Chullan wasn't ready!! The pattern wasn't ready. His arms weren't ready!! As the dagger came down, Chullan knew he could not add it into the pattern. What little lull there was in his right hand was timed to be on the bottom of the circle rather than the top. He needed it at the top in order to receive the dagger. His left hand couldn't take anymore. The dagger fell past the circles a bit to his right. A voice cried out something like, "You don't know what sacrifice is"... Chullan thought "I know sacrifice! Look at my arms!"

His right foot shot out and up, and a dagger jabbed down into his foot, bringing blood, He grimaced and hung on.

Bards cheered!! The show must go on!! Gods raised eyebrows. The man was mad! The crowd screamed.

Everything slowed down for the bard. The dagger was at the bottom of the circle sticking out of his foot. The lull in the pattern was also at the bottom, he waited half a second and kicked up, forcing his foot to flick. More pain as the dagger left his foot. He watched in amazement as he knew exactly how many turns the dagger would take before it entered the pattern. His hand tossed a juggled dagger up, and moved out slightly, catching the upcoming one by the tip, and simply pushed it upwards. The circle wavered slightly. His hand went back down, catching a falling dagger. The world shifted back into focus. He was still juggling, the circles a blur of twenty daggers. His ears became filled with a chant from the crowds, like a thunderous roar, "THE DAGGER! THE DAGGER!! THE DAGGER!!!"

Chullan smiled, and threw the daggers in the air like a showering fountain of steel, and he stepped back. The daggers piercing the sandy ground around the coin that was piled nearby. He scooped up his daggers, and the money, the roar of the crowd still filling the air. His head held high, as he smiled to the dense boy, and past through his now adoring fans.

So it was that Chullan, became Chullan The Many Handed, or just as The Dagger in some places. Now the most famous juggler in all of the southern Realms. Twenty daggers, for but an instant, twirling through the air. Gods both smiled and frowned on him that day, for he had even challenged them, sort of.

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