Finished a Tyrion chapter yesterday, one I've been struggling with for months. Made a major change to the end of the chapter, one I think works much better than what I had before.

Also tackled another Tyrion chapter that had been giving me trouble, mainly by ripping Tyrion out of the scene entirely and rewriting the whole damn thing from another point of view. Not quite done with that one yet, but I think it will work better as well. However, I am keeping the old Tyrion POV version of the same events on my computer, just in case I change my mind later and decide to go back.

其实没甚么新内容吧，马丁慢慢写，只要能写好写完就行

看不懂英文，请哪位大人翻译一下。

——固定台词，请不用在意

诶  子夜大人...

老马头很爱小恶魔啊，每次丢几句消息都少不了提到他

提利昂，是龙王来之前，大陆的一个国王的名字。马丁，早想好要给提利昂一个大手笔。

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引用第4楼hyh3206于2007-12-18 17:29发表的“”:
提利昂，是龙王来之前，大陆的一个国王的名字。马丁，早想好要给提利昂一个大手笔。

大陆有七个王国，国王数不胜数。西方人，特别是贵族取名都是照着名人来取的。光是囧的名字在小说所处的时代就有三个重要人物重复的，更别说那一大堆瓦德了。照你这种说法马丁准备给许多主要角色，特别是贵族男性准备了一个大手笔。不过马丁对这个角色的偏爱是显而易见的。

Finished a Tyrion chapter yesterday, one I've been struggling with for months. Made a major change to the end of the chapter, one I think works much better than what I had before.

昨天写完了提利昂的一章，这章已经反复改了好几个月了。把这章结尾来了个大改动，感觉比以前好多了。

Also tackled another Tyrion chapter that had been giving me trouble, mainly by ripping Tyrion out of the scene entirely and rewriting the whole damn thing from another point of view. Not quite done with that one yet, but I think it will work better as well. However, I am keeping the old Tyrion POV version of the same events on my computer, just in case I change my mind later and decide to go back.

原本是提利昂的另一章也有麻烦，现在把提利昂彻底踢出场景，从另一个视角重写了一遍故事。这章还没写完，不过感觉顺利多了。旧稿继续存在电脑里，以防万一哪天我又要改回来。

也就是说距他上一次更新写作进度也就多完成了1章半？确实慢了点啊。。。

他可没这样说。。。。你这是误解了

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引用第8楼ccxx于2007-12-19 10:06发表的“”:
他可没这样说。。。。你这是误解了

我好像记得上次他是说他已经完成了某个人的章节（忘是谁了），接下来会把注意力集中在提利昂的几个章节上的。。。

这是他10月22号更新的。。。距今快2个月了。。。

DANCE WITH DRAGONS? Yes, working on that too. Lately it's been Tyrion and more Tyrion. When I finish these three chapters, I will need to double back and pick up some of the other POVs lest my devious dwarf get too far ahead.