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有趣的游戏(消息才出来一天,FANS的剧本已经有很多个了)

有趣的游戏(消息才出来一天,FANS的剧本已经有很多个了)

  [s:2]
哈哈~消息才出来一天,冰火论坛上改编的剧本已经有8页之长了~

这是其中一个比较有意思的
第一集的剧本
有兴趣的可以看看,提提意见
也可以自己修改下啊~


You guys have a pretty good discussion going on here. I too am somewhat torn on how the first episode/prologue should be handled. Well, I myself don't find my idea perfect by any means, but regardless, here's how I think the prologue should play out (sorry if it's a bit lengthy):

The prologue opens up with Eddard and co. at the Tower of Joy in a ferociously stormy rain (not sure if this is how it is in the book, but it’s how I’ve always imagined it.) We see a close up of Eddard’s group, ready and determined to confront the kingsgaurd. Next we see the Sword of the Morning and his companions, guarding the entrance to the tower. For a few seconds the parties just stare at eachother as thunder echoes across the sky.

Ned: (matter-of-factly) I looked for you on the Trident.

We see quick snippets of the sky view from the trident and the surrounding lands, followed up by some fighting and then the scene switches back to the tower.

Ser Gerold: We were not there.

Ser Oswell: Woe to the Usurper if we had been.

Next, we see some snippets of Robert fighting. After a while, the recklessness in which he’s regarding his opponents and the pure hatred and zeal in his eyes makes it clear to the viewer that he’s trying, desperately, to make his way towards someone we can’t see yet. Before this person comes into view (we get a vague sight of Rhaegar’s armor/chest) the scene switches back again.

Ned: When King’s Landing fell, Ser Jaime slew your mad king with a golden sword and I wondered where you were.

We see a few clips of Aerys, looking quite the madman.

Ser Gerold: (angrily) Far away. Or Aerys would still sit the Iron Throne, and our false brother would burn in seven hells.

We see our first look at the Iron throne and then a close up of Jaime in his white cloak, golden sword in hand.

Ned: I came down on Storm’s End to lift the siege, and the Lords Tyrell and Redwyne dipped their banners, and all their knights bent the knee to pledge us fealty. (perplexed) I was certain you would be among them.

We see a glimpse of Storms End and some soldiers bending the knee, while others flee with the remaining Targ loyalists.

Ser Arthur Dayne: (determined) Our knees do not bend easily.

Ned: Ser Willem Darry is fled to Dragonstone with your queen Daenerys and prince Viserys. I thought you might have sailed with them.

Next we see a beautiful young girl, fear and tears in her eyes, being pulled by the hand of Viserys and their escort. They’re ambushed by the rebels and some fighting ensues. However, before we see the outcome, we’re brought back by Ser Oswell.

Ser Oswell: Ser Willem is a good man and true, but not of the kingsgaurd.

Ser Gerold: The Kingsgaurd does not flee.

Ser Arthur Dayne: Then or now.

The kingsgaurd done their helmets and draw their swords.

Ser Gerold: We swore a vow.

Martryn Cassel, Howland Reed, and the rest of Eddard’s men draw their own blades and begin to close in around the three knights in white. The Sword of the Morning and Eddard stare at eachother.

Ser Arthur Dayne: And now it begins.

Ned: (sadly) No, now it ends.

Just as they are about to fight, we get a bunch of images thrown at us: soldiers fighting on the Trident, the duel between Robert and Rhaegar, Jaime drawing his sword (to Aerys surprise) and killing the mad king, the Starks/Lanisters entering and pillaging King’s Landing, Jaime sitting on the Iron Throne with a smile on his face, Robert and Cersei getting married, Dany and Viserys heading out to sea on a ship, and then, just as Eddard and Dayne are about to cross swords, a woman’s voice screams “Eddard,” and we’re brought to the present. Ned is atop a horse and traveling with his sons to execute a deserter, his eyes closed in remembrance.

IMO, this is enough history to let the new viewers know that there was a war, the rebels won, this Aerys guy was crazy and his own sworn sword killed him, Robert clearly hates the guy he was fighting, the true queen and prince escaped to sea, and something significant happened at the ToJ.

Now, from here on out, the scene plays out just like the book, except right before Garret is executed, and Eddard is proclaiming the man’s death sentence, the boys start to question why he ran away and why he looks so distant. Then, as Eddard is still speaking, we get a close up of Garret’s blank face, and we see the events of the prologue. Except now, after “Wraithmar” chokes and kills Wil, we see him and the other wraiths draw their attention to Garret, who they now notice is hiding in the shadows, terrified by what he’s witnessed. He starts to flee, and the wraiths give chase. Garret is very close to his horse (did they have horses? I forgot) and he’s just about to saddle up when we see that Wraithmar is right on his tail, raising his blade and ready to swing. However, as he’s bringing it down, the scene changes back to the present and the blade changes to Ice, decapitating Garret.

Everything from here on out happens pretty normally: Theon kicks the head, Jon and Robb talk about fear/bravery, and then Bran asks his father “if a man can still be brave if he’s afraid.”

Another close up of Eddard. We see rose petals blowing across the sky and Eddard, close to tears, kneeling beside a blood stained bed. The screen fades to white and we hear the words “Promise me, Ned.” After a few seconds, we hear Bran call out “Father?” and we’re once again brought back to the present. Eddard composes himself, and answers “that is the only time a man can be brave.”

The scene with the wolves plays out the same, but after Jon says his great line, and the group departs toward Winterfell, the camera pans back and focuses on the distant north, hinting that something (the Others obviously) terrible is at work.

Finally, they get back. Ned talks about Ice/honor, Cat displays love, Cat tells Ned about Jon in the crypts, the king arrives and we recognize Robert, the woman he was wedding, and the guy who killed the other king. Robert and Ned talk about the rebellion, the Trident, Rhaegar, and Lyanna. All this talk reminds the viewer of the things they saw in Eddard’s flashback and they have a better (still not complete, but enough that they won’t be lost) understanding of the history of Westeros and how Robert became king. Also they can still show flashbacks of the rebellion since not that much was given away. Only the basic details. Robert offers the Hand position to Eddard and the prologue ends with Eddard alone in the crypts, (whispering "Winter is coming" to himself or something) and us wondering what his answer will be and what will happen next.

IMO, here are the good/bad things about my idea.

Good things about this approach:
- We get a much appreciated view into Westeros history, the characters, and where the story currently is.
- The prologue is kept intact, and we get an idea that there’s a distant, but impending danger not of this world.
- We see Dany (kinda), so her first appearance doesn’t seem so strange and out of place because we already have somewhat of an idea that she’s important.
- Like the book, it sets the viewers up to think that Eddard is the main (used loosely) character.
- Instead of an Old Nan/story telling narrative, or a flashback with no narrative at all, the event at the ToJ serves as a narrative for summarizing the rebellion.

Bad things about this approach:
- We see the complete events at the ToJ, meaning that it would be tedious to see it again when Ned dreams. However, maybe we could simply witness more of the fight instead. (IMG:style_emoticons/New/smiley2.gif)
- Bran’s 1st POV sort of becomes more leaned towards Eddard and Garret. But I really don’t think it’s that big of a deal. The talk about honor/bravery/knights is still there between Bran and Ned.
- Relies a little to heavily on flashbacks.

Whew! Well there’s my opinion on the prologue. Comments?
感觉没小说有味.
期待演员的功力. [s:46]
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