To the Angel of Music
        While my soul trapped in the darkness,
          I awaken by your voice sounding,
        I sew your scar both on your face and heart

            What caused your suffers?
            Why were you wondering?
          Why did we share the same fate?
           
      I heard the answer the from your beautiful mourns
              I continued pondering,
              And I sensed your regret,
     
        “Your greatness, that was not you suppose to love!
          It is the music and only the music!
        That is the precious belongs to you!
          Only with it, you shall live at once.
          And music is still playing.
        Phantom of opera! rise and return to your throne!
          And let you and your love sing at once!
                At once!
   
              And songs sang at once.  
         
         
         

Excuse me for being rude....but.....mon ami.....please work on your grammar this time......distinguish between verbs, nouns, and adjectives.............you are confusing me.......
Nice topic and nice style................just fix the grammar problems and it would be a nice poem......I wish I could write something like this......now I'm eventually losing the touch of Romanticism...

btw I think that all the POEMS IN ENGLISH can't get many replies in this forum.......It's a shame.......
C'mon fantasy lovers!! Fratelli!! work on your English!!!

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