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              Fall of Aziz
    I walk in the edge between light and darkness,
      Faith decreases as the sun pass,
      Journey still on, but suffer endlessly.
      Oh, holy light, where should be my path?
     
      While I was wandering,
      In dark, I heard a summoning,
    “Brother, why are you hesitating?”
   
      “Every thing I had belongs to me, don’t take it
      Lucifer, just rest in the pit.”
“Just answer me, what could change your stubbornness? Your rescue is I only want!

“Can’t you see? Innocents are suffering under the mighty one’s name rather than my powers.”
Don’t you know? Paradise and heaven are for these blinded mortals but not for us!
Hadn’t you realized? These who named as evil were never been punished; they rested and celebrated with me in the darkness. Because we have the eternity, the eternity of the enjoyments!

“Come, brother, follow me, you shall not wander in this wildness, it is time to go home, to go to new home where you can rested. No more suffer, no more sorrow”
 
With the query, I followed him slowly to the home,
Rested in this new home,
And embrace the darkness for eternity!
 
     
                When The Light Come At Once
               
                When the light come at once,
                When the songs of heaven sang at once,
                Holy child come to earth,
                Let everyone under his bless.

                May the fallen be rescued,
                May the corruption be purified,
                May the suffer end,
                And may the holy light blessed.

           
       
 


厉害
我什么时候能写英文诗呢
LZ好厉害!称赞的话不说了,因为不知道怎么说了。

不过中间那么长的句子LZ是故意的吗?就偶学过的诗都米这么长的(PS:都是20世纪50年代之前的)
偶比较喜欢后面那两段
When the light come at once,
When the songs of heaven sang at once,
Holy child come to earth,
Let everyone under his bless.

May the fallen be rescued,
May the corruption be purified,
May the suffer end,
And may the holy light blessed.
很有韵律和力度

不过,是不是因为the holy light blessed,才会不fallen和the suffer end呢?
Congratulations mon ami............you finally got some replies (and admirers...*wink*)
Very nice structure.........kinda reminds me of La Belle Dame Sans Merci
I think this one is the best of all your poems^^
However (hehe....expecting this word?).....same suggestion as for the Angel of Music one.....grammar.........
Also it would be nice to add "the" before the title.....
May His Dark Majesty be with thee. Salut!
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