终于忍不住又翻译了一篇文章,看过之后感慨万千,11年的语文课啊!诸位老师我对不起你们~~~~一篇豪情四溢又不失优美的文字竟让我翻成了说明文.大家也只当历史书看吧,实在看不过去的地方还请大家海涵.既然是描写战争的,地图自然少不了,首先送上Beleriand大地图一张,对照着文章看效果比较好(不过就最北部比较有用,另外图太小,建议大家载下来放大后观看).

另外是可能会用到的族谱(看到不认识的人名可以到这里查一下):
Noldor族谱

人类族谱(只有和这篇文章关系比较大的几个,双线是婚姻关系)

废了这么多话,正篇开始~~~~~

翻译 Battle of Unnumbered Tears
Nirnaith Arnediad   泪雨之战
战争始于第一纪472年,在Barahir之子Beren从Morgoth的王冠上夺取了一块Silmaril之后. Maedhros感到诞生了新的希望,因为他看到Morgoth并不是不可战胜的,因此,为了埃尔达命运的崛起,他召开了一次会议,这次会议被叫做Maedhros联盟.由于Beren和Lúthien的所作所为,新的希望充满了这片土地,但是对Fёanor的誓言{Fёanor要他的儿子们立誓杀死所有拥有Silmaril的生灵}依然存在,并且阻碍了所有美好的事物,不仅仅是Celegorm和Curufin所犯下的罪恶{指囚禁Lúthien,间接害死Finrod}.(联盟中)有一小部分帮助来自Nargothrond{Finrod建立的国度}在那里,Noldor精灵更相信他们的隐蔽堡垒的仅以保密为形式的防卫.Orodreth不会服从任何一个Fёanor的儿子的命令而参战,只有一小队人违抗了Orodreth的意愿,跟随着勇敢的Gwindor王子投入了北方的战争,行进在Fingon的旗下.
(注:关于Gwindor,我在资料里查到他是Guilin之子,至于Guilin是谁我就没有他的资料了,如果哪位知道麻烦介绍一下)
从Doriath{灰袍Thingol与Maia Melian建立的王国}来的军队人数就更少了,因为Thingol王同样不愿意给予Fёanor的儿子们任何援助.这是由于他们被他们在Valinor许下的誓言所束缚,而且Maedhros和他的弟弟们曾经就Silmaril一事出言不逊甚至恐吓过Thingol. 但是Beleg&Mablung{Doriath的军官}要求离开,他们不想和这次的北方战争扯上任何关系.Thingol准许他们走-----只要他们不为Fёanor的儿子们做事.
但是Maedhros有矮人帮忙,他们提供了全副武装的军队和大量的武器储备.Maedhros也聚集了他所有的部众和那些愿意追随他的人.来自东部{应该是Belereiand的东部}的Swarthy Men{这个怎么翻?黑人?}在他们的领袖Bor和Ulfang{记住这个名字,后面会很有用}的指挥下,整编训练军队,并且得到了精良的武器.他们甚至召集了他们在东部以外的亲属也来参军.在西部, Fingon和Himring{这个家伙没有查到}商议着备战, Brethil{Doriath西部边界的一森林}的人类在Haldir的领导下磨利了战斧.{这里的Haldir是个人类啊,不要混了.还有告诉喜欢精灵小哈的人,Haldir的意思是Hidden Hero}Maedhros联盟荣耀的军团中还有Falas来的Cirdan的人马甚至Ossiriand{ Belereiand东部的森林王国,地图右下角几条东西向支流处}的精灵.战争的消息也传到了隐秘王国Gondolin, Turgon王那里,他也秘密的为这场大战做着准备.{彩图为Gondolin细节}

在第一纪472年的仲夏,战斗在Anfauglith{就是地图上最北的Ard-galen,是一片沙漠}打响,在西边,是从Hithlum来的Noldor的至高王Fingon, 人类领袖Hurin和Huor及他们的部众.令所有人喜悦并且惊讶的是,伴随着号角声一只意料之外的军队赶来参加了战斗,那是来自Gondolin的Turgon的大军,一万名强壮的士兵身披闪亮的盔甲,配着长剑驻扎在南部,守卫着Sirion隘口{大概是Gondolin图左上角两座山之间所包夹的部分}.在东边,除了Gondolin, Swarthy Men和矮人以外就是Maedhros和他的弟弟带着Noldor精灵的主要部队.{这块我也没明白,Gondolin的军队不是在南边嘛?}很明显他是想直接挥旗从东向西挺进,然后当他接近Morgoth的军队时,就在Dorthonion的山上点起烽火,作为给西边的Fingon的信号,Fingon看到了信号后从Ered Wethrin{图中南北向部分山脉,名字是竖着写的}全力进军,这样他们就可以像铁锤和铁砧那样把Morgoth夹在中间,把他击垮.但是这些计划Morgoth已经从Swarthy Men里面的叛徒那里听说了,他让他们拖住Maedhros,这样他就可以选择他进攻的时机.Morgoth向Hithlum方向派了一支佯装强势的军队, 正当心急的Fingon想出击时,Hurin却反对,他嘱咐Fingon应该等待Maedhros的信号,不如让那些兽人在攻击要塞和山中的军队时消耗他们的有生力量. 但是Morgoth命令他在西面战场的指挥官无论用什么方法也要迅速迫使Fingon开战,当他们到达Rivil河入Sirion河的河口时{见彩图},指挥官下令停止行军而派了先遣骑兵队接近Fingon防线.
在这些骑手中竟有Guilin之子,Gwindor的兄弟Gelmir,那些兽人把他挤到最前面,砍掉了他的手,脚,最后—他的头.面对这突如其来的暴行,Gwindor和他满腔的愤怒简直要把河水燃烧成熊熊火焰,他再也无法克制自己了.Nargothrond的勇士们越过河流歼灭了那队骑兵紧接着又向他们的大部队开战.见到这种情况,所有西面作战的军队都沸腾了,Fingon吹响了他的号角,他的军队直扑向Morgoth的大军,许多Gondolin的部队在Turgon来得及阻止他们之前也参加了战斗.
Noldor精灵们手中的宝剑挥动时的闪光就像燃烧在一片芦苇地中的大火.进攻如此的猛烈几乎要颠覆Morgoth的整盘阴谋,在他向西开进的军队能得到增援之前他们就已经被一扫而光,这是有史以来杀死兽人最多的战斗,他们还在原地待命时就被成片的坎倒.Fingon的大军全然不顾大漠的扬沙一举攻到了Angband{Morgoth的老巢,黑白图中没有画出,看彩图}的城墙下.
Gelmir的兄弟Gwindor始终在战斗的最前线,他们来势如此的凶猛以至Nargothrond的战士们冲垮了外城门开始收拾那些Angband阶梯上的兽人.但是最后,所有的精灵都在这里遇难了……没有援军,他们行动的太快根本没有部队能跟得上.{这里的所有精灵因应该是Gwindor带领的所有Nargothrond的精灵}Morgoth让他的主要部队穿过秘门,把Fingon的精灵大军从Angband击退,他们一直撤退到沙漠地区,损失惨重.Haldir和他从Brethil带来的绝大部分人在殿后时被杀害了.直到夜幕降临,后撤的部队仍离Ered Wethrin很远.兽人把Fingon的部队包围了,包围圈越来越小,但他们一直战斗到第二天.随着太阳的升起希望也随之到来,Turgon的号角声传达着援兵的临近.Gondolin来的Noldor精灵们穿着坚固的铠甲,突进兽人的阵列朝Fingon杀出一条路.据说,在战斗中,Turgon和Hurin----他就站在至高王的身旁----的相见是一次愉快的会面.{这句是胡翻的.不过从大体意思上看,它为后来Turgon一族与Hurin一族的联姻做了铺垫,Turgon的女儿Idril嫁给了Hurin的弟弟Huor的儿子Tuor}
再说从背后攻击敌人的Maedhros和其他Fёanor的儿子们{原文这里很有意思,他把Maedhros和sons of Fёanor分开来说},这时兽人已经军心大动并且有一部分都逃命去了,Morgoth不得不使了最后一招,他在Angband的最后一只部队倾巢而出,Glaurung{Morgoth造的Arda第一条龙}一伙,Balrogs{译林版翻译为炎魔}和野狼,但即使这些情况都属实,Morgoth也不可能赢.可是就在此刻,Ulfang和他儿子们的图谋和背叛显露出来了,大批的Easterlings{就是上文提到的Swarthy men堕落的人类,来自无人知晓的东部,故有Easterling
之称}纷纷倒戈或是逃跑,他们的心中充满了谎言和恐惧.Ulfang和他的儿子们倒向了Morgoth一边袭击Maedhros的后方侧翼部队.Maedhros被迫东撤,损失惨重.但是这些Easterlings并没有得到Morgoth许诺过的报酬.在他们自己制造的混乱中,Ulfang和他的儿子误打误撞到了Maedhros所在的位置,Ulfang的小儿子Uldor被Maglor杀死,Bor和他的儿子们{Easterling里面比较忠诚的一族}在他们自己被杀前杀死了Ulfast和Ulwarth{看名字就知道又是Ulfang的儿子}现在是兽人,野兽{刚才提到的龙,野狼和Balrog}和Uldor召集的埋伏在Eastern Hill的邪恶人类三股势力袭击Maedhros的军队.结果Maedhros的部队被打散,士兵四散奔逃{我很不愿意用这个词,但是原文就是fled this way and that,谁有更委婉的译法?}然而命运挽救了Fёanor的子嗣,尽管他们全受了伤,但都免于一死.他们聚集了Noldor和矮人的剩余兵力,杀出一条血路,向Mount Dolmed{Blue Mountains中央的一座山峰,这在lotr时期的地图最西边}方向逃亡.最后东部军队只有来自Belegost的矮人们还在顽强作战.{Belegost是Mount Dolmed东麓的一处矮人的城堡}矮人比人类和精灵都经得起火攻,他们都戴着厚实的面罩,这在对火龙作战时大有好处.如果不是矮人,Noldor精灵就都会被杀死.矮人们团团围住了Glaurung,它对战斧{不是巡航导弹^-^}的一次次重击有些吃不消了,甚至它身着的甲胄也经不起这样的猛攻.愤怒的火龙转过身一下子扑到Azaghal身上{Azaghal是Belegost之王},就当它进行最后一击时,Azaghal同时把他的刀直刺进Glaurung的腹部,Glaurung严重负伤不得不逃离战场.但是Himring山{黑白图中Maedhros名字下面的山脉,字超小}还是失守了,但Fёanor的儿子们都生还.
在西边,敌人以3倍于Fingon所剩的力量如潮水般包围了Fingon一行.Balrog杀进Hurin, Turgon和Fingon之间,把他们彼此分隔开.就在那,Gothmog,Balrog的至高首领转向了Fingon,那是一次多么残酷的对决!最后,Fingon的侍卫纷纷阵亡只剩Fingon一人,但他一直战斗,直到另一只Balrog绕到他身后向他挥动了火鞭.终于,Fingon--Noldor的至高王,倒下了,他被Gothmog的黑斧头击中,火焰从他裂开的头盔中喷涌而出.那些Balrogs威压着他把他打倒在地,鲜血染红了他那破碎的银蓝旗.
这一天是要失败了,但Hurin,Huor和Hithlum的人们还在顽强作战,兽人并没能赢得Sirion隘口的胜利.在Eldar与Morgoth的战争中Hurin和Huor坚持到最后一刻的事迹最为著名.人类之父{指Hurin,Huor}设法使战争转向对他们有利的一面,这也对Uldor的背叛做了补偿.{这句也是胡翻的-_-}Hurin对Turgon说: “趁现在还有时间,走吧,陛下!你已是Fingolfin家族的最后一人,你是Noldor最后的希望.只要强大,守卫森严的Gondolin依然屹立,Morgoth就仍会感到他心底的恐惧.”Turgon答道: “然而Gondolin不会长久的隐秘了,一旦被发现,它必将陷落.” “但是只要它耸立哪怕只是一小会儿” Huor道: “就会给外面的世界带来人类与精灵的希望.这是我已看到了死亡而对你说的话.虽然我们将永远的阴阳相隔,我不能够再看到你那白色的城墙,但从你和我这里将升起一颗新星.”{这预示了Tuor与Idril的结合和Eärendil的诞生}
Turgon接受了这无畏的话语,撤走了所有Gondolin的Noldor和能召集起来的Fingon的部队.Turgon的军官,Glorfindel和Ecthelion{我最喜欢的Noldor!}保卫着大部队的侧翼,沿着Sirion河后撤,消失在山谷中.Hurin和Huor仍带领着Hithlum的人们守在Sirion隘口,渐渐的他们开始退后,直至退到Serech沼泽之后{Fen of Serech,见第二副彩图},前面是一条小溪,他们不再让步了.Morgoth的大军蜂拥而至,他们踩着死人的尸体跨过了小溪像潮水环涌着礁石一般包围了Hithlum的残余人马.
战斗中,Huor眼中毒箭身亡,他的身边躺着无数勇士,Hithlum的人无一生还.Hador的儿子,Galdor和Gundor在这场著名的战役中阵亡.
兽人砍掉勇士们的头把它们像堆宝山那样垒起来,阳光照在血泊中他们的一缕缕金发上,闪闪发光.最后,只剩下Hurin一人,他抛开手中的盾牌,双手挥舞着战斧.在歌谣中传唱道,最后一战,他杀死了成百个兽人.但是末了它们还是把他活捉了,那些兽人死命的用它们的手紧抓着Hurin,尽管他砍掉了许多这样的手臂.然而兽人的数量源源不断,直到最后把Hurin完全埋在下面.他就这样被它们嘲弄着,五花大绑拖回了Angband.
(原文到这里就结束了,感觉好像没有完,确实ME的历史还在延续)
后记: 这篇文章翻到一半的时候才发觉选材太不好了,不前不后,给不熟悉ME早期历史的人一种前不着村后不着店的感觉.不过实在忍不下心从头在翻一篇,也就只好这样了.感兴趣的人可以自己读读The Silmarillion,如果大家不是对我这个小高中生的文笔厌恶到极点,我想我还会翻一些有关第一纪的文章.Anyway,在这里先谢过大家的眼球啦!   P.S.有错就挑,有建议就提,来者不拒.发邮件给我也可以squall416@hotmail.com

            Battle of Unnumbered Tears: Nirnaith Arnediad

The battle started in the year of 472, after Beren, Barahir`s son had managed to take a Silmaril from the crown of Morgoth. Maedhros felt new hope arise, for he saw that Morgoth was not invincible and thus he called a council for the raising of the fortunes of the Eldar. This council was called the Union of Maedhros. For new hope ran through the land, because of the deeds of Beren and Luthien. But the Oath of Fëanor lived and hindered all good, and among the evil were the deeds of Celegorm and Curufin not the least. Small help came from Nargothrond; there the Noldor trusted rather the defence of their hidden stronghold provided by their secrecy and stealth. Orodreth would not go to war by the bidding of any son of Fëanor and only a small company, against the will of Orodreth, and who followed the valiant prince Gwindor, came to the Northern war to march beneath the banner of Fingon.

From Doriath came an even smaller host for Thingol would also lend no aid to any son of Fëanor. This was because the sons of Fëanor were being constrained by their oath, sworn in Valinor, and because Maedhros and his brothers had sent hard and threatening words to Thingol of their claim upon the Silmaril.But Beleg and Mablung asked for leave, for they were unwilling to have any part in the deeds of the Northern War; and Thingol gave leave for them to go as long as they did not serve any son of Fëanor.

But Maedhros had the help of the Dwarves, in armed force they came to the aid and great stores of weapons they also supplied. He gathered all his men and those who would follow. The Swarthy men of the East, commanded by Bor and Ulfang, were marshalled and trained for war and given fair arms, and they summoned yet more of their kinsfolk out of the East to join the host. In the West, Fingon prepared for war by taking counsel with Himring. The people of Brethil whetted their axes and had as their leader Haldir. From the Falas came many of Cirdan`s Elves and even some of Ossiriand`s could be found in the glorious host of the Union of Maedhros. To the hidden realm Gondolin tidings of war also reached the ear of Turgon, and also in secret he prepared for great battle.


At midsummer F.A.472 the battle was fought upon the sands of Anfauglith. In the West stood Fingon, High-King of the Noldor together with Huor and Hurin. With them were their Men and the Elves from Hithlum; and to the joy and wonder of all there was a sounding of great trumpets and there marched up to war a host unlooked for. The army of Turgon issued forth from Gondolin, ten thousend strong, with bright mail and long swords and they stationed Southwards guarding the Passes of Sirion. In the East stod Maedhros and his brothers with the main host of the Noldor, save Gondolin, the Swarthy men and the Dwarves. It was resolved that Maedhros should march with banners from the East openly, and when he had drawn forth the host of Morgoth, a signal was given to Fingon. A great fire was lit upon a hill in Dorthonion. Upon seeing the signal, Fingon should issue in full strength from the hills of Ered Wethrin and take the might of Morgoth as between an anvil and a hammer. But since Morgoth knew much of this from his treacherous servants among the Swarthy men and trusted them to hold back Maedhros, he chose his hour to attack. He sent a seemingly great force towards Hithlum, and hot of heart Fingon wished to assail them. Hurin, however, spoke against this, bidding him await the signal from Maedhros, and rather let the Orcs break themselves in their attack against his fortresses and strength of arms arrayed in the hills. But the captain of Morgoth in the West had been commanded to swiftly draw forth Fingon into open battle by whatsoever means he could, and when he had reached the inflowing of Rivil into Sirion, he halted and sent forth riders. These rode up close to the lines of Fingon, and with the riders was Gelmir son of Guilin and brother to Gwindor and they shoved him forth and hewed off his hands, feet and at last his head. By ill chance across, the water stood Gwindor and his wrath was kindled to flame and he could not longer be restrained. The warriors of Nargothrond sprang over the stream and slew the riders and then drove on against the main host. At seeing this, all the host of the West was set on fire and Fingon sounded his trumpets and his army leaped forth in a sudden onslaught of the army of Morgoth. Many of the host of Gondolin also joined in the battle before Turgon could restrain them.

The light of the drawing of the swords of the Noldor was like fire in a field of reeds, and so fell was the their onset that the designs of Morgoth almost went astray. Before his army, which had been sent West, could be strengthened, it was swept away; it was hewn down as it stood and the greatest slaughter ever of the Orcs took place. Thus the banners of Fingon passed over the dust of the plains of Anfauglith and were raised before the walls of Angband. Gwindor, the brother of Gelmir, was in the forefront of that battle and they came with such strength that the host from Nargothrond burst through the outer gates and slew the Orcs upon the stairs of Angband. In the end, however, the Elves were all slain here, no help had come to their aid. They had moved with such haste and surprise that none could follow. Morgoth had let his main force come forth through secret doors, and Fingon and his Elves were driven back from the walls of Angband and retreated over the desert of sand with great loss. Haldir and most of the Men from Brethil were slain defending the rearguard, and as night fell they were still far from Ered Wethrin. The Orcs surrounded the army of Fingon and though he and his forces were pressed ever harder, they fought until day. But with the rising of the Sun came hope, for the horns of Turgon were heard, heralding the approach of the rescuing host. Turgon and the Noldor of Gondolin were strongly clad in mail and they broke through the ranks of the Orcs, hewing their way to the side of Fingon. And it is said that the meeting of Turgon with Hurin, who stood by his King, was a glad one in the midst of the battle.

And now came Maidhros from the East and the sons of Fëanor assailed the enemy in the rear. The Orcs wavered and already some were turning to flight. Morgoth loosened his last strength and emptied Angband by sending his last troops into battle - Glaurung and his brood and Balrogs and wolves - but even if all had proven faithful, Morgoth could not have won. But in that hour the plots and treachery of Ulfang and his sons were revealed, for many of the Easterlings turned and fled, their hearts having been filled with lies and fear. Ulfang and his sons went over to Morgoth and fell upon the rear flank of Maedhros; and Maedhros was driven Eastward and back from the battle and his army suffered greatly. But the Easterlings reaped not the reward that Morgoth had promised, for in the confusion that Ulfang and his sons had wrought, they came near the Standard of Maedhros. Here, Maglor slew Uldor, and Bor with his sons slew Ulfast and Ulwarth before they themselves were slain. The host of Maedhros was now being assailed from three sides; by the Orcs and beasts and a new strength of evil men that Uldor had summoned and kept hidden in the Eastern hill. As a result his army was dispersed and fled this way and that. Yet fate saved the sons of Fëanor. Though all were wounded, none were slain, for they drew together and gathered round them the remnant of the Noldor and Dwarf armies. They hewed a way out of the battle and escaped towards Mount Dolmed. Last of all the Eastern forces to stand was that of the Longbeards of Belegost. The Dwarves withstood fire more hardly than Men and Elves, and the Dwarves were wearing great masks, which stood them in good stead against the Dragons. If not for the Dwarves, the Noldor would all have been slain. But the Dwarves made a circle around Glaurung, and he could not witstand the blows of their great axes, nor even the armour of Glaurung could fully withstand such an onslaugt. Glaurung in his rage turned and crawled over Azaghal, but with his last stroke, Azaghal drove his knife into the belly of Glaurung and so wounded him that he fled the field. His brood in dismay followed him back to Angband. But the hill of Himring was taken, though all of the sons of Fëanor survived.

In the west Fingon was surrounded by a tide of foes thrice greater than all that was left to him. The balrogs drove in between Hurin, Turgon and Fingon, and they were sundered from each other. There, Gothmog, high-captain of Balrogs, turned against Fingon and what a grim meeting that was. At last, Fingon stood alone with his guard dead about him, but he fought with Gothmog until another Balrog came behind him and cast a thong of fire about him. At last fell Fingon, High-King of the Noldor, by the black axe of the Balrog Gothmog, and flame sprang from his helm when it was cloven. He was overborne by the Balrogs and beaten to the earth and his blue and silver banner broken and coloured with his blood.

The day was lost, but still Hurin and Huor with the great men from Hithlum stood firm. Yet the Orcs could not win the passes of Sirion. The last stand of Hurin and Huor is the most renowned deed in the war between the Eldar and Morgoth. One that the fathers of Men wrought on their behalf, and so was the treachery of Uldor redressed. For Hurin spoke to Turgon saying "Go now, Lord, while time still is! For last are you of the House of Fingolfin, and in you lives the last hope of the Noldor. While Gondolin stands, strong and guarded, Morgoth shall still know fear in his heart." And Turgon answered "Yet not long now can Gondolin be hidden, and being discovered it must fall." "Yet if it stands but a little while" said Huor " then out of your House shall come the hope of Elves and Men. This i say to you Lord with the eyes of death; though we part for ever, and I shall never look on your white walls, from you and me shall a new star arise."

Then Turgon accepted the valiant words and withdrew with all the Noldor of Gondolin and such of Fingon`s hosts could be gathered. As he went back down Sirion, Glorfindel and Ecthelion, his captains, guarded his flanks and he vanished into the hills. But Hurin and Huor held the passes of Sirion and drew the men of Hithlum about them. Slowly they withdrew until they came behind the Fen of Serech and had the young stream before them. Then they gave way no more. The host of Morgoth swarmed against them, and they bridged the stream with the dead and encircled the remnant of Hithlum as a gathering tide about a rock

Huor fell fighting by a venomous arrow in the eye, and all the valiant men of Hithlum were slain about him in a heap. Galdor and Gundor, sons of Hador, died in this renowned fight. The Orcs hewed the heads of the men and piled them as a mound of gold; and the Sun was shining on their yellow locks amid the blood. Last of all stood Hurin, alone, and he cast aside his shield and wielded his two-handed axe. In the last stand, it is sung he slew a hundred of the Orcs. But they took him alive at last, for the Orcs grappled him with their hands, which clung to him though he hewed off their arms. However, ever their numbers were renewed, until at last he fell buried beneath them. Then binding him, they dragged him to Angband in mockery.

           

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最初由 youye 发布 "Himring"不是一个"家伙",那是Maedhros所居住的山,那座山也称为"Ever-cold".文里的"Himring"指的应该是住在Himring山上的Maedhros的子民.

. In the West, Fingon prepared for war by taking counsel with Himring. 总觉得这里Himring不应该是指代啊,而且Fingon要商讨就因该和Maedhros商讨,没必要把整个Himring全拉 出来啊,再说,好像用地名指代精灵的例子很少,尤其是象Maedhros这样的大腕,都直接说名字.
第二个问题,如果照你所说的话,那么Swarthy Men和矮人又从哪一路进攻呢?   根据后文,他们确实和Maedhros他们在一路的阿..
一头雾水............

           

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最初由 youye 发布 第一个问题是理解问题,认为Himring是指住在Himring的精灵只是我个人意见. 至于第二点, 翻译成"除了冈多林,Swarthy men和矮人的军队"应该是没有问题的. 是很明显的翻译错误.不是"接近Morgoth的军队",而是"引开Morgoth的大军",好让Fingon趁机直接进攻Angband. 此贴依然自删

为什么要自删呢?大家一起讨论问题嘛,又不是一定要争个谁对谁错,我的英文水平本来就有限啊~~~~~
你最新提的这个问题很对,当时查字典,draw forth是引起,博得的意思,可是这里用这个解释显然不对,而引开有个专门的词组,draw away.后来我就按照Maedhros的作战思想胡翻了一个接近,因为Maedhros并不是想让Fingon去偷袭Angband,这应该是意料之外的,是Morgoth的诡计,他早就在秘门里埋伏了士兵,这些都是后文提到的.Maedhros的真正意图是两面夹击Morgoth,但是这个计划没能成功,Fingon中计,损失了大批人马往回撤了.战斗并没能像计划的那样协同作战,变成东西两方各自为战了.
以上是本人的一点见解~~~~

            在下错了～～～因为看你那么辛勤耕耘，在下惭愧万分，特别是当我看过一遍之后，并未真正明白 于是在下在家潜心研究，现在，现在，终于明白过来了······

但是，真的好像说明文，比我的论文还······（抱头鼠窜中）

另外，受你的激励，你的生日贺文那个大坑，我又填了:p

怎么图都没有了? 哎.....按从上倒下的顺序重贴一遍

Battle of Unnumbered Tears应该是第五战吧，贴一张示意图
临时空间，时间长了可能看不见，所有要保存的快

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