有几句翻得不错的，可以贴上来吗？

（Grima 诱惑 Eowyn 那句：）
白皙而冰冷，像春寒料峭
So fair So cold. like a morning pale
spring still clinging to winter's chill.

（Gandalf 劝 Théoden：）
塞特雷德的死不是你造成的
Théodred's death was not
of your making.

白发人不该送黑发人
No parent should have
to bury their child.

（Elrond 劝 Arwen：）
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世界毁灭之前，人类国王的荣光会长存
An image of splendor of kings of men in
glory undimmed before breaking of world

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但是你，我的女儿
But you, my daughter

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你将在黑暗和疑惑中徘徊
you will linger on in darkness
and in doubt

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就象冬日的夜晚，没有星光伴随
As night falling winter has
come without a star

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你会独自游荡
Here you will dwell...

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在枯树下陷入悲伤
bound to you grief, under
the fading trees ...

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直到世界改变，你的生命慢慢耗尽
Until all the world has changed & long
years of your life are utterly spent

            Grima 说的话，就别翻译得那么书卷气吧。

“白发人不该送黑发人”用在老外身上感觉很怪。

            不会，Grima 的话一向很书卷气的，简直象莎士比亚写的台词，比如以下：

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你这魔法师总是跚跚来迟
Late is the hour...
in which this conjurer chooses to appear

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我替你取名叫噩耗，你这讨厌的访客
Lathspell spell I name him.
ill news is an ill guest.

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闭上嘴，不要再耍弄你那蛇信
Silence! Keep your forked
tongue behind your teeth.

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我不会浪费时间和一条无知的蛆虫争辩
I have not come here to bandy words
...with a witless worm.