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lich+knight 发表于 2006-1-2 17:30

To the angel of music

&nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;   To the Angel of Music<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;   While my soul trapped in the darkness,<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; I awaken by your voice sounding,<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  I sew your scar both on your face and heart<br><br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; What caused your suffers?<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  Why were you wondering?<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  Why did we share the same fate?<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  <br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  I heard the answer the from your beautiful mourns<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; I continued pondering,<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; And I sensed your regret,<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;   <br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  “Your greatness, that was not you suppose to love&#33;<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; It is the music and only the music&#33;<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;   That is the precious belongs to you&#33;<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; Only with it, you shall live at once.<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; And music is still playing.<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;   Phantom of opera&#33; rise and return to your throne&#33;<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; And let you and your love sing at once&#33; <br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  At once&#33;<br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;   <br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp; And songs sang at once. &nbsp;   <br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;   <br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  <br> &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  &nbsp;  <br>

O Caro 发表于 2006-1-5 13:09

Excuse me for being rude....but.....mon ami.....please work on your grammar this time......distinguish between verbs, nouns, and adjectives.............you are confusing me.......<br>Nice topic and nice style................just fix the grammar problems and it would be a nice poem......I wish I could write something like this......now I&#39;m eventually losing the touch of Romanticism...<br><br>btw I think that all the POEMS IN ENGLISH can&#39;t get many replies in this forum.......It&#39;s a shame.......<br>C&#39;mon fantasy lovers&#33;&#33; Fratelli&#33;&#33; work on your English&#33;&#33;&#33;

lich+knight 发表于 2006-1-6 13:08

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